SpamtheHobbit's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[MH16: RAW]

Raaaaaaaaaaaaaw! (like a lion)

LOL it's Actually not that raw with at least 6 different levels and lol it does get louder around 1.15 not to bad if that was intentional. It's crazzy like i went from Ah Ahh Ahhh! by Dj Gary McF (lol fast tripy dance track with alot of voice) to this smooth experiment. My heads not in the right place to review proper lol...
Any who, some of the synth melodies were really sweet and could do with speeding up if dance is what your going for, I surgest 180bpm or more. I think this is airing on the side of tecno. Dare you to rack it up after this (so this is the intro) and spin it up fast with some cool affects, look for insparation in other like music, even though your stuff is very indervidaul. If you spot something cool, see if you can recreat that your self, in your style of corse... HAv fun makeing more
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FairSquare responds:

Actually, i suck at making tracks better XD
And i don't think i'm going to continue in the Dance genre, this was just a little experiment. Maybe there will be more in the future, maybe not.

And i do listen to other peoples music alot and sometimes that really helps :-)
Thanks for the review!
MH16

[MH16: Endless Possibilities]

Improved? HELL YA!

Side note: LOL this isn't much fun three power cuts in the last 2 hours, dam it! All i want to do is write this review -_-
Soooo here it goes for the forth time, copying as I go ^-^
Love this; it has a smooth progression that I've come to tag with most of your work. And O my gosh this really does take your work to a new level, in my opinion. The slow build up is the best I've seen before. Taking you time to bring in instruments quietly and softly, allowing the piece to progress from loud to soft epically. I really do think that's the best I've heard from you. Just listen to it, not even the chimes get drowned out and then just as it gets repetitive the synth thing (lol) comes in to vamp it back to mintness! (Y)
I mean, you could so see this in some one's Christmas flash. Heck it could be in mine, if you'd let me and I can perk up to get it done. Like I started it on pivot and then I'll import it into flash ^_^ (u up for me using it??)
O and mega congrats on this being your 51st piece, wow that's a good size archive. Your very talented keep going with mate! =D
Spam ["-]
(*sigh* At last *Clicks submit*)

FairSquare responds:

3 power cuts in 2 hours? XD
Sure you can use it! You're going to be the 1st that's going to use my music in a flash :-)
And thanks for the review. I always like to read how you describe the song and it's progression.
btw, have u noticed the panning effect at 1:16 til 1:29? It's the first time i used it :P

MH16

[MH16: The Tragedy Of Happiness]

LOL Really pushing it

Mate wow, it's different from some of the stuff i heard recently, you can tell you tried and put alot into it.
The melody is smashing and lol soo catchy (dodododododum)
*Clicks Download* adds to my collection of your stuff...
Improvments...
Try not to fit too much into fast, when the beat rock on to the piece it was slowly drowed out by the other stuff coming in over the top. Could hav longed that amazing 4/4 beat out to give it more strength within the song. then when the other instraments come in there will be more base.
And o my gosh love the pause towards the end worth wating for, i can tell it was working towards that... How about trying some echo on those quite bits just to add even more atmospher...
O and cool you dutch lol you hav very good english
Gooooooooooooo MH16

FairSquare responds:

Yeah, it's a bit over the top :P
Thanks for the advice and the review!
btw, maybe you could write a review on my newest song too? :-)

MH16

[MH16: Unsolved Mysteries]

ITs smooth

Not to sound to over the top, but i think in a year or two with some even more practice and work your looking at some amazing talent!! THat i wouldn't be surpried that you useing profetionaly. Free lance (start making a mix cd with your best stuff)
OK sooo you really need some pointer in how to improve to a even grater lv.
Try and change your pieaces feeling, like wat i'v hurd its mostly 'dramatic power' (if thats a feeling) on some really try to get across a feeling of sadness (minnor keys) or Joy (light noted, and major keys) Dramatic tenchtion (lots of building and loud intraments like tomtoms or crashes of symobols) or even comic (be playfull with the notes, lots of mix of intraments allmost repllying to each other, like the flutes go then the trumpets reply. Also fast notes runing up and down the octave can be funny)
Really just know wat you want to make befor you do it, like you hav so much potentional and now all you need is experience. try different intraments on pc or in phisicly. And most of all listen to others work as well as your own, pick out the tempo and the rising melodes, music is more about listening then just hearing. Really take your time to make every piece the best it can be ^_^
If your stuck for ideas, just look around you at whats going on, wats on the tv, on the wall, how are people treating you. How does these things make you feel? How would you describe them through music?
GOooooooooo For it, i'v lisented to this track about 11 times while writing this and seriously i am not bord of it!!! HUst love your tracks >_<
Hav fun and plz make more...

FairSquare responds:

Really thanks for this review!
If i would become a professional artist, that would be so cool!
And don't worry, i will make more and i will do my best to get better :-)
Thanks for all the advise and (again) , thanks for this review!

MH16

[MH16: Waking The Unexpected]

REAlly Good Again

Same feelings same rythm, you do hav a natural talent for this kinda meaningful music, i would love to here you plan a real phisical instrument...
=D

FairSquare responds:

Well, i already play a real instrument. I play drums :-)
Thanks for the review!

MH16

[MH16: When Angels Rise]

Wow

This is amazzing and this be my in my few rated 10's
Just love the flow, i mean from the begining it didn't seem like there was anything but as more kicked in... THe drums yaa... o smooth those strings... Just where, how did you find that melody.
I mean the peace and feeling behind it, sends tngles down my back. LIke when you've just watch an incredibale scene in an epic movie at the cinima or when u'v caught the eye of your true love across a-mass of people and both smile with happyness.

To all that listen, just listen. REALLY take the time to slow down, beath deeply, let only this affect you triger everythings that means something in your life...

All i missed was more...

FairSquare responds:

Thanks!
Maybe you could check some of my other submissions too? :P
But seriously, thanks for this review. These kind of reviews just give me more reason to make songs.

MH16

[Solus- Christmas Lights]

Well done

Just lovely ^_^
Very festive and super sweet ummm
HOpe this becomes well known
Ooou, don't ya just want to open your presants now
Spam :)

SolusLunes responds:

Man, if someone uses this in a GOOD christmas flash I will be an extremely happy man. :D

[~The Deep~]

MIx it UP x_X

LOve it, the beat, the melody and slow progression from peaceful to tecno then bac. Smooth pipes...
I think this is really well made and that it should get a high score, cus it suits my taste alot *click download*
Spam ^-^

ReapersArms responds:

I think it deserves a higher score too but I guess the people have spoken...thanks for the review

[There Is Nothing Left]

Smooth ^_^

I do quite like this, recorded guitar always good when done properly.
love the melody bit.
Still hear noise/fuzz around and tat, BUt it's always so difficult to get rid off lol...
Keep practicing! You could chuck in a paino, laying down some cords. But like this needs it.
One bit really made me tingle
=D
I use audacity when recording through my computer, if that helps you. It's a good free peice of sofware. Loadsa stuff to fiddle with vocals and that :)
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Keep it up

tomcashman responds:

Thanks! :) I usually use audacity and kristal, this was my first ever recording from about two years so ago so I know the quality ain't great :P Check out my songs, they're a somewhat of an improvement.

[Creactive Labs - Didn't Care]

Really like the slice of cake ^_^

You thought of remixing like some other high class games around.
Simple beat but well made.
Love the chimey bit!!
:)
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joncena responds:

Its a combination of the fallout music and hiphop these days. The beginning of the track fits perfectly with a lyric about the love for my own style and that I DO care what other people say, but watch your words... or else... tssk tssk... boom ;p.
Dont take that to literally ofcourse ;) its all a game.

Btw... Cakes...? Who told you about cakes... did Glados talked to much again?
And I tought that Creactive Labs would be the perfect cover for good ol' Carf ;p.
Anyways this is a side project, the Creactive Labs label is just for myself as I coopereate with other people, alone I am just Carf, the one that indeed tells lies about cakes ;).

Thanks for the Rev dude.